Avoid Fuzzy Words by J. Luke Bennecke
When writing novels, it’s important to avoid the use of “fuzzy words” when possible. As an author, you already know the importance of using descriptive language to create vivid images in your reader’s minds. However, sometimes we fall back on “fuzzy words” like: nice, good, uncomfortable, and pretty to describe things. While these words may seem harmless, they can actually weaken the impact of your writing and make it less engaging for the reader.
Let’s take a look at an example:
“The sunset was really pretty.”
In this example, the word “pretty” is a fuzzy word. It’s not specific or descriptive, and it doesn’t paint a vivid picture in the reader’s mind. It’s a weak and generic way to describe something that should be breathtakingly beautiful.
To make your writing more impactful, it’s important to use specific and descriptive language. Let’s take a look at how we can improve the example:
“The sunset was a blaze of orange and red, casting a warm glow over the horizon.”
In this example, we’ve replaced the fuzzy word “pretty” with more descriptive and specific language. The reader can now visualize the sunset and experience it more vividly.
Another example of a fuzzy word is “uncomfortable.” This word doesn’t tell the reader anything specific about what the character is feeling or experiencing. Let’s take a look at an example:
“She felt uncomfortable around him.”
In this example, the word “uncomfortable” is a fuzzy word. It doesn’t tell the reader anything specific about what the character is feeling or why she’s feeling that way.
To make your writing more impactful, it’s important to use specific and descriptive language. Let’s take a look at how we can improve the example:
“She shifted in her seat and avoided his gaze, feeling a knot of anxiety in her stomach.”
In this example, we’ve replaced the fuzzy word “uncomfortable” with more specific and descriptive language. The reader can now understand what the character is feeling and why.
In conclusion, avoiding the use of fuzzy words can make your writing more impactful and engaging for the reader. So the next time you’re writing, take a moment to review your work and eliminate any fuzzy words to make your writing more specific and descriptive.
